I was happy and ecstatic as my family and I travelled along the roads to my cousins 1st birthday. Cake and food, fun and games, entertainment and more! I loved this amazing birthday party. It was also a chance to catch up with my favourite cousins! This was an exciting day and a joyful night because we stayed for the night. I wish it would last forever!!
Boaza, Room 15
3 comments:
Hi Boaza,
That sounded like a great first birthday. I liked the way that you used lots of interesting and different words like "ecstatic". Ka pai! Keep building your vocabulary and we will stop by again to visit your blog.
Miss Lavakula and Room 10@Pt England School
Hi Boaza,
Sounds like you had a good first birthday.I wish was there!!!
Hi Boaza, sounds like you had a lot of fun.That was a good piece of writing.I can't wait to see more of your writing. You used good vocabulary.
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