Friday, June 25, 2010

........Monster Horror........

My three friends Justin, Sam, Cody and I were walking along the path to SPRONX when suddenly a hideous deformed creature struck us from behind. “Help me! Help me!” was going over and over in my head. We were petrified and we sped through a narrow alley way which was the nearest escape route that we could find. Once we thought we were safe at the end of the alley, we stopped running.

“We made it!” Justin yelled out.

“I DONT THINK SO,” screamed the creature that was now standing right in front of us again. “Don’t celebrate too early,” he yelled as we got a glimpse of the evil in its eyes.

As we tried to escape, we were trying to hide the feelings that were racing around inside us. He opened his mouth and a smell of an old rotten can of tuna blew right into our faces.

We stood there thinking, “What is it doing?” and as we speed quickly away covering our mouths. As we ran the sun began to rise and shine very heavily upon the creature. The creature started to turn into stone slowly from its feet to the tip of its head. It started to scream in horror as its body shattered into ashes captured with its horrified soul.

We stood there as if we were turned into stone with our eyes wide open and as our mouths released open with dried out saliva not knowing to believe or to think that this thing that we just saw was true.

After our one of a kind experience Sam and Justin would try to tell every one the story while Cody and I would just stand there quietly and not say a word.

By Maroussia

1970 KFC Ad

Back in 1970 K.F.C made an advertisement and in that ad there is a chubby little boy named Hugo and a chubby little girl named Holly.

Hugo and Holly along with their parents are going to go have some K.F.C but it was taking so long and the kids are bored, but when they arrived at K.F.C their eyes light up and they are fighting over who was going to go and get the food. Holly won and so Hugo goes and get the food and when he comes back they are stuffing their faces with as much chicken as they could and they then head home and were as happy as could be.

The things that I like about the advertisement are that it is a cartoon not a real life ad. I also I think it is an awesome idea to have animals and to make everything so happy when they finally get their K.F.C. (Kentucky Fried Chicken)

Although it is a cartoon, it is believable and what happens in that ad would usually happen in a normal, everyday family.

The only thing that I would change would be to make the kids slim, not chubby and fat.

No this advertisement would not work today because well I mean who would buy something that would make you that obese and advertisers today don’t use cartoons any more. They use real people because this is living proof there product is good.

By Jorjah Rm 2

1970 Kentucky Fried Chicken Ad

In 1970 a KFC advertisement was made which features cartoon characters Hugo and his family.

The animated advert looks incredible as it had intense colours and detail for its time.

It is extremely amusing and cheerful as two chunky eager children sing a tremendous jingle on their way to KFC. The ad features many animals having picnics as Hugo and his family drive to the KFC outlet. The animals are portrayed as bouncing which makes the cartoon appealing. When they finally reach the Kentucky Fried Chicken outlet the children keenly eat the mouth watering chicken as if they haven’t eaten for days.

I believe this ad will still work in current times as most advertisements these days are not cartoons and the ones that are will usually be too graphic and too descriptive and do not give you a feel of a fun family meal. I also think this add will appeal to children and adults rather than just children or just adults.

The only thing I would change about the advertisement would be to replace the jingle they sing to a more recent category of music which would appeal to more modern families.

By Synergy Rm2

Friday, June 18, 2010

Descriptive Writing

Descriptive Writing

Room 2 has been doing Descriptive Writing on video clips of TV Ads and static images.

Tuesday, June 1, 2010


On Tuesday 18 May 10 students from our school participated on a tree adventure trip held in Wood-hill Forest.

Firstly we waited for the police to arrive and their vans to pick us up. When they arrived the girls hopped into one van and the boys hopped into the other van. We stopped of at Point England School to pick up some other students.

It was sure a long drive but we were excited and nervous at the same time. When we arrived at the place, the fun began. After that we changed into our P.E gear and then we put on our harness for safety. We were eager and a little freaked out at how high the obstacles were.

We got to do each course after the tree adventure staff showed us how it’s used. Everyone was eager to start.

Eventually we started and everyone went on different kinds of courses and levels. Some of us made it to the end course which was number 8.
Last of all we ended our fun adventure and headed back to school. We took off our safety gear and said thank you to the staff and headed back. When we returned, we were exhausted from all that fun activity. Thanks to the police for transporting us safely to the tree adventure and back.

By Berttina