One a pig named Luke saw a professional electrician. Luke the pig was jealous of the electrician. The next morning he saw another electrician and became even more jealous. He saw an electrician up the power pole. He wished he was an electrician.
One day he went up the power pole and Luke was trying to be an electrician. Luke touched the wire and Luke got shock. After the shock his tail was curly and stayed that way. That’s how pigs got their curly tails.
By Renz (Room 16)
7 comments:
Dear Renz Hello from Scott's Mum
I thought your story was really cool and it sure made me laugh.
From Scott's Mum
Dear Renz Hello from Scott's Mum
I thought your story was really cool and it sure made me laugh.
From Scott's Mum
Dear Renz Hi from Scott
I hadn't seen your story at school bu I thought that you made it sound really cool and I showed my mum and aunty too.
Hi Renz
That's a really funny story. I enjoyed reading it, keep up the good work.
Mrs Walley
To Renz
your piece of writing was really awsome.
Elaine
To Renz
Your story was so funny how the pig got its curly tail.
From Earle
Hi Renz
This is Anthony saying how amazing that story was.That was really good.I like the way the big pig got shocked.It was really interesting,keep it up.
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