Tuesday, May 12, 2009

Just So Story - How the Beaver got its strong teeth


One day a young beaver was going for a walk down the alleyway when he tripped and fell right on his teeth. His teeth were shredded and he did not know what to do.

He ran as fast as he could until he reached his house. He told his parents the whole story and his Father ‘the fixer’ thought he would design him new teeth.

His Dad made Beavers teeth as strong steal so the accident would never happen again. Then his parents stuck the teeth back into his mouth. They were so good other Beavers wanted them. That’s how Beavers got their strong teeth.

By Anthony

5 comments:

Earle said...

To Anthony
I really liked your story about the beaver, it was so cool.

By Earle

Anonymous said...

Hey Anthony
I really liked your story.
It's really interesting.keep up the good work.
from olivia

Elaine said...

To Anthony
i really like your piece of writing it was really awsome you had some great ideas.


by Elaine

Tamaki Primary School said...

Good story, Anthony. Did you guys make these stories up yourself or are they retellings?
From Mrs Kelly

Tama said...

TO: Anthony
you got a cool story. its the meanest.

FROM: Tama