Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Sustainability Rhyme


MY NAME IS PLANET EARTH,
HOW CAN I SURVIVE,
THIS BAD LITTLE CURSE,
IF YOU HAVE TO DRIVE.

HEY HAVE YOU HEARD OF REDUCE?
HAVE YOU HEARD OF RECYCLE?
HAVE YOU HEARD OF REUSE?
NO I DON'T THINK SO
BUT THESE THINGS YOU MIGHT EVEN SAVE THE WORLD.


HEY NZ WERE ASKING YOU
NOT TO CUT DOWN THE TREE’S
CAUSE OUR LITTLE PLANET EARTH
IS BEGGING YOU PLEASE
WE NEED OXYGEN TO BREATHE FROM THE TREE’S.

HEY LISTEN UP TO WHAT I GOT TO SAY
JUST KEEP ON WALKING EVERYDAY,
MY BROTHER IS USING THE CAR
THOUGH HE’S NOT GOING FAR,
IT WILL BE PRETTY SWEET IF HE USED HIS FEET
SO THAT’S IT FROM ME
PLANET EARTH IS SAYING PLEASE!
PROTECT OUR TREES DON'T LITTER ON ME.

By Longoa'a and Tama-Junior

7 comments:

Maiolo said...

Hi my name is Maiolo from Glenbrae School.
excellent poem.That poem will help us keep our school clean.I liked it when you used those words like Reduse,Reuse and Recycle.

By Maiolo Fifita.

Olivia said...

Hey Longoaa and Tamas jnr
we really enjoyed the way how you wrote your poem about planet Earth.
Thanks for caring
well done longo and tama

Marion said...

Well done Longoaa and Tamas- it's a great poem. I am really concerned about the future of our planet because even though I will probably be dead before things get bad, my children will still be alive hopefully and I worry that Earth will not be a very pleasant place to live. Unlike your brother, I try to walk wherever I can because although it is small, every little thing we do should make a difference and the more of us that do the little things, the bigger the effect will be.
On an English note - did you check your apostrophes? I find them difficult too ...

Chyann said...

Hey Longo,

Great rhyme you made its so good you and Tama could be a rapper when yous get older.
Well done yous done a great job.
By Chyann Finau.

Lorraine said...

sup Longo its me lorraine


i like your rap about sustainibility it makes me wonder
why people do those things to planet earth :)

Miss Aris said...

AWESOME!!!! I liked the way you used humour to deliver an important message. Well done

Mele said...

Amazing Poem guys!I'm sure people will be wanting to know more of our planet earth.I liked the way you put rymes in your sentences it was really interesting!

Mele Room 15 T.I.S