This is record of my learning in the time I was at Tamaki Intermediate School. This blog is now closed for new posts and comments. However, you are most welcome to read it.
Wow, an animal expert and a Haiku poem master!I think I like the dolphin poem best, you only use important words, but it's my favourite mainly because I love dolphins.Miss Garden
Hey Longoa'aYou did well with your Haiku poems. I think I like the Koala one best. Imagine being a Koala and having nothing to do all day except eat eucalyptus leaves!Keep posting, look forward to seeing your next piece of work up here.
Good Poems I really liked reading them From:room 6
Well I don't know that i would like to be a koala even if I had nothing much to do all day - imagine having only gum leaves to eat!You have found some interesting things about each of your animals. Well done Longoa'aMarion
Hey, the koala one is wrong. The second sentence has 8 syllables.
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