Tuesday, June 2, 2009

More Animal Haiku Poems


Hey, I have written three Haiku poems. Let me know which one is your favorite.

Dolphin


Blow holes to breathe through,
Shows off in front of others,
Has a nice color.

Penguin

Walk slow through the snow,
The father keeps the eggs warm,
Eating fish daily.

Koala

Nothing to do so,
They eat eucalyptus leaves,
And sleep in big trees.

By Longoa'a

6 comments:

Miss Garden said...

Wow, an animal expert and a Haiku poem master!
I think I like the dolphin poem best, you only use important words, but it's my favourite mainly because I love dolphins.
Miss Garden

Miss Aris said...

Hey Longoa'a

You did well with your Haiku poems. I think I like the Koala one best. Imagine being a Koala and having nothing to do all day except eat eucalyptus leaves!

Keep posting, look forward to seeing your next piece of work up here.

spxroom6 said...

Good Poems I really liked reading them
From:room 6

spxroom6 said...

Good Poems I really liked reading them
From:room 6

Marion said...

Well I don't know that i would like to be a koala even if I had nothing much to do all day - imagine having only gum leaves to eat!

You have found some interesting things about each of your animals. Well done Longoa'a
Marion

Anonymous said...

Hey, the koala one is wrong. The second sentence has 8 syllables.