This is record of my learning in the time I was at Tamaki Intermediate School. This blog is now closed for new posts and comments. However, you are most welcome to read it.
Well done for writing and reciting your Father's Day poem in such a lovely manner.Keep up the good work Jorjah!
Hello JorjahWow that was a great poem. You used some good descriptive language. I think your Dad would be very happy to have such a lovely poem written about himself. From Miss Walley
Your dad seems to have many talents.Aren't you a proud girl? Keep up the good writing.
Jorjah, I am going to share your poem with students in the school I teeach at so they can hear a really good example of how to paint a picture with wordsChristina
Your Dad would love that poem. He would be very proud of you & I am too!
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