This is record of my learning in the time I was at Tamaki Intermediate School. This blog is now closed for new posts and comments. However, you are most welcome to read it.
Hi ScottWhat a lovely Father's Day poem!I like the way you used rhyming words to make the acrostic poem more interesting!Well done!
Hi ScottThere was some good rhyming in your poem. I think you used some interesting language features. Keep up your great writing.Miss Walley
Enjoyed your poem Scott. Your dad is a good role model. Keep up the good work!
Hi SonWell what can I say I enjoyed your acrstic poem for fathers day your choice of words and the way you read it congratulations son for such a desrciptive poem of your father figure.Love Mum
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