This is record of my learning in the time I was at Tamaki Intermediate School. This blog is now closed for new posts and comments. However, you are most welcome to read it.
You have expressed really good thoughts about your dad. He seems an awesome dad. Keep up the good work.
Hi ZahraThat was a very descriptive poem. Your Dad sounds like a great person. It was very well written.I hope to see more of your writing.From Miss Walley
Hi ZahraYou have written the poem very well.Keep it up!
Hi Zahra I really liked your poem but you have to speak louder and clearer so that we can hear the cool things that are put on the blog. Don't be shy.
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You have expressed really good thoughts about your dad. He seems an awesome dad. Keep up the good work.
Hi Zahra
That was a very descriptive poem. Your Dad sounds like a great person. It was very well written.
I hope to see more of your writing.
From Miss Walley
Hi Zahra
You have written the poem very well.
Keep it up!
Hi Zahra
I really liked your poem but you have to speak louder and clearer so that we can hear the cool things that are put on the blog. Don't be shy.
Hi Zahra
I really liked your poem but you have to speak louder and clearer so that we can hear the cool things that are put on the blog. Don't be shy.
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