This is record of my learning in the time I was at Tamaki Intermediate School. This blog is now closed for new posts and comments. However, you are most welcome to read it.
Wow that was a great poem. You used some good descriptive language. I think your Dad would be very happy to have such a lovely poem written about himself.
Jorjah, I am going to share your poem with students in the school I teeach at so they can hear a really good example of how to paint a picture with words Christina
Well done for writing and reciting your Father's Day poem in such a lovely manner.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work Jorjah!
Hello Jorjah
ReplyDeleteWow that was a great poem. You used some good descriptive language. I think your Dad would be very happy to have such a lovely poem written about himself.
From Miss Walley
Your dad seems to have many talents.
ReplyDeleteAren't you a proud girl? Keep up the good writing.
Jorjah, I am going to share your poem with students in the school I teeach at so they can hear a really good example of how to paint a picture with words
ReplyDeleteChristina
Your Dad would love that poem. He would be very proud of you & I am too!
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